Wednesday, October 17, 2007
Peleas de perros Formal Writing #3
Michael Vick es un criminal. Es horrible que El creo peleas de perros. Vick necesita ir a la carcel por su crimen. Peleas de perros son ilegal. El necesita pagar impresio por sus mal echos. No es bueno hacer lo malo. Te meterias en problemas esta danino para los animales. Michael Vick no es un buen modelo para sus fanticos. Michael Vick tiene que hacer buenas cosas para los fanaticos no ser desapontada. Son lo porque Michael Vick es una estrella de futbol americano no es una excusa por sus crimens. Cuando usted tiene la fama asi, no es una razon para abusar el sistema legal. No te hace parecer bueno y si nada hace a personas miran hacia abajo sobre ti. Un leccion es necesaria y la aprendara en el carcel.
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Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer: Caren
Student Reviewer: Chantel
Assignment: Formal Writing #3
Date: 11/27/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
4
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
It was very good.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
none
Some suggestions for next time:
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