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¡Hola mi nueva Amiga!
Me llamo Caren. Soy de California. California esta en Estados Unidos. Tengo 17 anos. Yo voy a Cordova High School. Estoy en grado 12. Este ano es mi ultima ano de colegio antes de la universidad. ¿Como haz estado? No te he hablado con tigo en mucho tiempo. Espero que todo este bien con tigo. Fue bueno hablar con tigo, espero escuchar de ti pronto.
-caren
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Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer: Caren
Student Reviewer: Chantel
Assignment: Informal Writing #1
Date: 11/27/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
4
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
It was very good.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
none
Some suggestions for next time:
Try putting more detail in it.
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