Wednesday, September 26, 2007
Technologia Formal Writing #1
En el mundo que nosotros vivimos la tecnologia es una gran parte en las vidas de todas personas. La tecnologia se a convertido en una nueva educacion. La gente participa en varios organizaciones que asistan en educacion. En la primera fuente la gente crea un proyecto llamado "Lifeplus.""Lifeplus" hace parte de la iniciativa tecnologias de la informacion para a la sociedad. En la segunda fuente el articulo grabado describe un organizacion llamado "Espanol En Emerica." "Espanol En Emerica" es un programa que ayuda a la latinos en el uso de computadoras. Las clases son en universidades. Ellos reciben una nueva educacion que no sabian que tenia antes.
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Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer: Caren
Student Reviewer: Chantel
Assignment: Formal Writing #1
Date: 11/27/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
4
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
It was very good.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
none
Some suggestions for next time:
Try writing a little more in detail.
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