Friday, September 28, 2007
PAZ Informal Writing #2
Todos quieren paz por todas partes paz es muy importante para las personas que viven en Columbia. Es muy importante para todas personas que conozco. Paz es un signo de respecto. Paz crea unidad. Columbia no tiene unidad. Columbia tiene mucha peleas. Paz necesita realizar. Todas las personas necesitan tener cultura general de paz. Con la ayuda de todas paz no es imposible. Columbia crea una fiesta de paz para celebrar.
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Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer: Caren
Student Reviewer: Chantel
Assignment: Informal Writing #2
Date: 11/27/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
4
The sentences relate to each other.
4
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
4
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
4
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
It was very good.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
none
Some suggestions for next time:
Try putting a little more writing in.
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