Friday, October 5, 2007
EL AMBIENTE Informal Writing #3
El ambiente tiene muchos problemas. A la gente no les importan. El ambiente tiene mucha contaminacion del aire, la gente no usa los basureros, usan el piso a lado de usar. Tambien las sociedades desarroladas tienen muchas problemas de los humos de las grandes factorias, los coches, y los aerosoles. El ambiente deberia ser muy bonito no deberia ser un basurero grande. Nosotros necesitamos cuidar el ambiente o el ambiente sera destruido. El govierno necesita regular y enforcar a la gente para la protecion del ambiente.
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Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer: Caren
Student Reviewer: Chantel
Assignment: Informal Writing #3
Date: 11/27/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
4
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
4
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
4
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
It was very good.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
none
Some suggestions for next time:
Try writing a little more and explaining yourself.
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